Norris likes it, as does Ms. Campbell - but it's too 'up front', ie, 'higher-up's will disapprove'.
The design/idea is fine, but it's pretty much just the words.
So either we get rid of the words, or change them.
On a side note, Norris mentioned that preg testing will be abolished in the future as they plan to buy ultrasound equipment.
What's next, getting new agricultural tractor videos?